Kiss In The Rain

Chapter 5 Machines beeped softly in the background as Stephanie came out of unconsciousness. Through her closed eyelids she could tell that the lights were off and that she wasn’t ...

Thanks for the review, Derek, and I will explain it all in chapter one, when i post it.

Okay. I agree with everyone that this was waaaayyyy way confusing. But, I found that it added character to your piece. It was one of those stories where it is ...

This was very well written, and I can very much relate. I know you're worried, but if she's still in love with him after four years, that means she was ...

Whoa, what a freakkkkk!!! Vampire thing is awesome, I love it already, but I hate that Jessie is totally a jerk vampire :(. He sounds really hot, lol. One other ...

Another great chapter; short, but sweet and to the point. But they're getting married a day after they met? ...a little weird. But otherwise fantastic :). Here are a couple ...

Hey, yay, this is beautifully written :). I think that it is very brave of Susannah to choose Jessie over her parents' wishes. Another great chapter, and I don't know ...

Hey, thanks guys for the crit. Like I said, I'm not normally a poet, I'm more of a fiction writer. I think this poem was supposed to be rather repetitive; ...

Another spectacular read. I really enjoy Jessie, for I know a man most like him, haha :lol:. I am a little confused, though. I am assuming that this takes place ...

I found this quite intriguing, Kay Kay :). I loved how you began this with a letter, it was unique and exciting, and it immediately caught my attention. This was ...

Ribbons A girl sits dressed all in white with ribbons In her hair. She gazes at the moon, Wishing on the stars, that her prince Will save her heart, like ...

Another fantastic chapter :). Your fight scene was beautifully written, and Shanzi is pretty awesome, if I do say so myself. I find Anna really kind of annoying, lol. But ...

Yikes. Jinn is real tough, huh? I'm really excited for the next chapter! Fantastic. Truely fantastic.

Haha, I agree with springrain on the part of Jinn eating the chicken bone. It made me laugh at the picture. I am really enjoying this, it's a fantastic read ...

:) This was fantastic. I really love your main character's name: Lachlan. It's very unique and I like the sound of it. I think that you have a very interesting ...